AFH 33-337
The Tongue and Quill
AFMAN 37-126
Preparing Official Communication
The person or organization we are communicating on behalf of, such as our supervisor, commander, or the AF.
Sending Audience
The person who will be receiving the communication.
Receiving Audience
Questions we should ask about the Sending Audience
Questions we should ask about the Receiving Audience
This will allow you to do the following:
Narrowing Your Topic
The reason for our communication
Purpose
Benefits of knowing your purpose
Four Purposes
An effective _____________ not only lets the audience know the reason for your communication, but also appeals to the audience.
Purpose Statement
Types of Appeals
Purpose Statement: Experts tell us, to improve our organizations efficiency by more than 40%, we must incorporate problem solving techniques in our daily routine. What is the reason for this communication?
To Persuade
Purpose Statement: Experts tell us, to improve our organizations efficiency by more than 40%, we must incorporate problem solving techniques in our daily routine. What method is used to appeal to the audience?
Tells the reader what’s in it for them
Finding Supporting Materials
Key to Finding Supporting Materials
To quickly and efficiently find appropriate support materials.
Four Techniques of Organizing
Forces you to align your main points and supporting ideas in logical order
Outlining
Implies that you get moving - that you write without critical judgment
Drafting
Drafting DOs
Drafting DONTs
Tongue and Quill Patterns of Organization
Discussing events, problems, or pressures in the sequence of time they take place or should take place. This is the simplest and most commonly used approach in writing.
Chronological (Pattern of Organization)
Starting at a point in space and proceeding in sequence to another point. For example, north to south, clockwise/counterclockwise, top or bottom, etc.
Spatial/Geographical (Pattern of Organization)