Exemplar Plan for Essay
Bad vs good paragraph about photosynthesis
Weaker answers will focus on all of photosynthesis – as a process
involving membranes – perhaps mention membranes in chloroplasts (this
approach would gain a maximum of about 18 out of 25).
Good answers will focus on thylakoid membranes in the chloroplast and
the roles of components of these membranes in holding pigments, components of the electron transfer chain, ATP synthase and the membrane as a barrier allowing maintenance of a proton gradient – and, perhaps, role of membranes in maintaining the special chemical environment inside chloroplasts
Tips for the essay
Content has to be of A-level standard to score highly – this includes scientific terminology and the explanation of ‘importance’.
Example of bad vs good
Content has to be of A-level standard to score highly – this includes scientific terminology and the explanation of ‘importance’.
Example – importance of gas exchange in humans – many students gave reasonable degrees of detail about gas exchange in the lungs. Most then said this was important ‘to stay alive’, or ‘for respiration’ – not A-level standard.
Strongest responses linked oxygen uptake to oxidative phosphorylation in respiration, as a source of most of the ATP the body requires.
Or to prevent increase in concentration of carbon dioxide in blood – leading to fall in pH and adverse effects on eg enzymes
What the essay is not
💥Your key to success is PRAT:
Plan – list 5 relevant topics you will write about
Range – Make sure you are not writing about the same concept repeatedly (e.g. don’t write about chemiosmosis in photosynthesis and then again in respiration)
Apply – Once you have explained the key concepts then APPLY this to the question by explain WHY it is important, this often links to another topic in the A-level.
Terminology – Make sure you have includes LOT of A level standard key terms.
Describe the structure of DNA.
Accept ‘Polynucleotide’
Accept for ‘phosphate’. phosphoric acid
Name and describe five ways substances can move across the cell-surface membrane into a cell.
For ‘carrier protein’ accept cotransport protein
Describe the processes involved in the absorption and transport of digested lipid molecules from the ileum into lymph vessels
OR
Bring/release/carry fatty acids/monoglycerides to cell/lining (of the ileum)
OR
Maintain high(er) concentration of fatty acids/monoglycerides to cell/lining (of the ileum);
Accept lipid/fat for fatty acid/ monoglyceride
Accept chylomicrons form
Accept exocytosis for ‘vesicles move’
Describe how the structure of a protein depends on the amino acids it contains
b) 1. Structure is determined by (relative) position of amino acid/R group/interactions;
Accept for ‘interactions’, hydrogen bonds / disulfide bridges / ionic bonds / hydrophobic-hydrophilic interactions
Accept alpha helix/β-pleated sheet for ‘secondary structure’
Accept for ‘interactions’, hydrogen bonds / disulfide bridges / ionic bonds / hydrophobichydrophilic interactions
OR
Creates complementary/specific shapes in antibodies/carrier proteins/receptor (molecules);
OR
Quaternary structure formed by interactions/bonds between polypeptides;
Accept for ‘intereactions’, hydrogen bonds/ disulfide bridges/ionic bonds/hydrophobichydrophilic interactions
Accept prosthetic (group)
Describe how mRNA is formed by transcription in eukaryotes.
Ignore DNA helicase.
Reject hydrolysing hydrogen bonds.
OR
(In RNA) Uracil is used in place of thymine;
Reject suggestions that RNA polymerase forms hydrogen bonds or joins complementary bases.
Describe how a polypeptide is formed by translation of mRNA.
Define ‘gene mutation’ and explain how a gene mutation can have:
- no effect on an individual
- a positive effect on an individual.
For 4 marks at least one mark must be scored in each section of the answer.
(Has no effect because)
OR
Mutation is in an intron (so amino acid sequence may not change);
Accept description of ‘degenerate’, eg some amino acids have more than one triplet/codon.
(Has positive effect because)
OR
Results in change in polypeptide that positively changes a named protein;
For ‘polypeptide’ accept ‘amino acid sequence’ or ‘protein’.
Describe the sequence of events involved in transmission across a cholinergic synapse. Do not include details on the breakdown of acetylcholine in your answer.
Accept action potential for depolarisation.
Explain five properties that make water important for organisms.
OR
A solvent so allowing transport of substances;
Describe the biochemical tests you would use to confirm the presence of lipid, non-reducing sugar and amylase in a sample.
Lipid
1. Add ethanol then add water and shake/mix
Non-reducing sugar
3. Do Benedict’s test and stays blue/negative;
Amylase
6. Add biuret (reagent) and becomes purple/violet/mauve/lilac;
Describe the chemical reactions involved in the conversion of polymers to monomers and monomers to polymers
Give two named examples of polymers and their associated monomers to illustrate your answer.
eg. Amino acid and polypeptides
Alpha glucose and glycogen
Nucleotide and polynucleotide
Lord Howe Island in the Tasman Sea possesses two species of palm tree which have arisen via sympatric speciation. The two species diverged from each other after the island was formed 6.5 million years ago. The flowering times of the two species are different.
Using this information, suggest how these two species of palm tree arose by sympatric speciation.
OR
No gene flow
OR
Gene pools remain separate;
OR
Change in frequency of allele/s
Describe how the structures of starch and cellulose molecules are related to their functions.
Starch (max 3)
Cellulose (max 3)
Describe the processes involved in the transport of sugars in plant stems.
Accept: ‘sugar/s’ for sucrose but reject other named sugars e.g. glucose.
Accept: co-transport (with H+ ions).
Accept: pressure gradient.
Accept: sieve element/tube.
Describe the appearance and behaviour of chromosomes during mitosis.
(During prophase)
(During metaphase)
(During anaphase)
(During telophase)
Describe and explain the processes that occur during meiosis that increase genetic variation.
Essay Topic - ATP
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Essay Topic - Haemoglobin
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