quote and analysis: 1
“And then he plucked a pear from a branch.”
the alliteration of p emphasises the casual action he has done.
quote and analysis; 2
“…it sat on his palm, like a light bulb. On.”
simile compares pear to a lightbulb. minor sentence emphasises that it’s now gold
quote and analysis; 3
“…strange, wild, vain.”
simile suggests power but with a negative change.
quote and analysis; 4
“unwrapping each other rapidly, like presents, fast food.”
simile describes their previous relationship
quote and analysis; 5
“That was the last straw”
short sentences declaring end of relationship