What is an elegy?
A reflection upon someone who has died. `
Describe ‘ancient child’.
An oxymoron - she’s like a child because she’s so dependent on life support (instead of parents)
Describe ‘registered’.
Sheers doesn’t register like a machine would, he registers in a more emotional and sentimental way. The final stanza is more personal and reflective than the descriptive first stanza.
Describe the title.
There is the subtle link between ‘on going’ (‘going on’) and ‘ongoing’, furthermore reflecting the progression of life to death.