Conversational tone
‘On another occasion’
Graphic hyperbole
‘I see every round as it rips through his life’
Colloquial and intimate style
‘One of my mates goes by and tosses his guts back into his body’
Repitition
‘probably armed, possibly not’
Metaphor
‘blood-shadow’
Simple sentence
‘End of story, except not really’ ‘Then I’m home on leave’
Sibilance
‘in some distant, sun-stunned, sand-smothered land’
Time phrases
‘week after week’ ‘here and now’
Double meaning
‘his bloody life in my bloody hands’