The brown enormous door her lived by with its breathing and thick hair was too close for him to judge
Sensuous quote and imagery
5 senses are engaged
He hid his pints behind a two by four
Shameful (comparative to bishop)
Knows it’s wrong
Alcoholic
Light lashed
Alliteration
…he thought he almost might endure his exile yet another year of more
Voluntary exile
Self isolation
“Sunrise grazed” “first star came to warn”
Contrast light v dark
Nights are harder for him
But it took him a long time finally to make his mind up and to go home
Closure
Redemption
Tone
Sorrow
Sadness
Content @ the end cause he’s going home
Theme
Redemption
Human spirit
Resilience
Technique
Alliteration
Contrast
Vivid imagery