good and ready
colloquial phrase - suggests her efficiency, adding to brisk opening setting the sinister scene
ready to renounce
Alliteration - speeds up the pace of the line showing her eagerness to dispense with him
Connotations (renounce) - of religion, giving something up suggesting her desire to sever ties
Enjambement - reflects the intended break up
sweet flesh
connotations - of pleasure, attraction, predatory - suggests she is almost animalistic in her desire to destroy him/could be sarcastic implying his lost sweetness
Note just for lent.
short sentence - sounds blunt and certain showing her resolve as she is determined to cut him off
(For/Ever)
Parenthesis/Enjambement - includes extra info suggesting her desire to ensure it’s permanence. Line break reinforces the idea of separation along with capitalisation
assembling the ingredients
connotations - of planning, execution - could refer to her level of obsession or could suggest a potion linking her to a later witch image, plotting his downfall
last treat
Connotations - of finality ominous comment of their relationship suggesting it’s end
proper
connotations - of superior, formal - suggesting their previous meals have not held any significance for her
(after all didn’t they always eat together rather more than rather well?)
parenthesis/rhetorical question - shows her awareness of the decline of the romance in their relationship`
tearing
connotations - of aggression, violence presenting her as a destructive force with ill intent
scrambling the salad
sibilance - creates a sinister and fluid sound speeding up the pace showing her almost frantic efforts
Connotations - of lack of control, energy suggesting her excitement of what to follow
,maybe lighting candles,
parenthesis/list - interjecting thought comes to her as she is ticking off other tasks showing her desire to make the event perfect
Connotations - of romance adds to irony of the scene as she intends the opposite
anyway/
enjambement - shows awareness that she has diverged froma original thoughts as she adds elements to her plan
admire
connotations - of pride - and unusual feeling to experience when breaking up showing her scheming nature getting satisfaction from this
(and oh yes now will have to lie on)
parenthesis - link to well known phrase ‘made your bed’ suggesting her poor choices have led her here and now she must deal with the consequences of his betrayal - may literally lie across the table and receive lies in return
the silverware, the nicely al-/dente vegetables, the cooked goose
list - of sophisticated things presents the meal as almost ceremonial - civilised appearances contradicts actual intent
Symbolism - aldente veg is soft yet has a crunch mirroring her pleasant exterior but harsh intent. Cooked goose suggests he has no hope for surviving her ambush
he could be depended
connotations - of unreliable - unless persuading his own pleasure
bring the bottle
plosives - creates bitter tone suggesting her disapproval and his infidelity as a result
imagining it done with
connotations - of excitement, independence suggests her anticipation as she desperately wants to end the relationship to enjoy the aftermath
and/exactly/
Enjambement/single line word - emphasises anticipation and suspense but also shows precision with which she imagines the scene
leftover hash
metaphor - suggests s mess of chopped up leftovers as if she is using the scrapes of him for amusement
The Girls
Capitalisation - gives them importance/power showing women to be formidable when together
when those three met again
allusions - to Macbeth depicts the women as witches, creatures known for trickery, ill deeds suggests harmful intent
what very good soup/she could render from the bones
Metaphor - suggests her using her experiences with him as food for her friends as if she is trying to draw as much as possible for their tragic relationship to feed their desire for gossip. Compares them to vultures picking the bones clean