Wilfred Owen
Soldier and war poet
Writing against propaganda
Greatly suffered from shell-shock and struggled with the devastation of war
In the first draft of this poem, it was addressed to Jessie Pope
Died on November 4th 1918, a week before armistice day and the end of the war
1917
Towards the end of the war
The views about war are now a lot more pessimistic, contrasting to earlier periods, like 1914
Weirdly placed stanza break
Semantic field of pain/disability
Many short clauses
Very unpoetic
Sanitised
Rhyme
Alternating Rhyme
Iambic pentameter - more slowed pace and serious
Repetitive quality just like the war
Meter
Iambic Pentameter - more slowed pace and serious
Structure
4, unevenly sized, stanzas
S1 - 8 lines
S2 - 6 lines
S3 - 2 lines
S4 - 12 lines
Stanza 1
Describes how war has transformed the soldiers into ‘ old beggars’ who physically cannot cope with the demands of war
Stanza 2
Focuses of a gas attack, describing how the soldiers struggle
Stanza 3
Is a short isolated 2 lines, which explores how what he has seen will forever stay with him long after in his ‘dreams’
Stanza 4
Shifts to criticising the ‘old lie’ that dying for your country is somehow noble or desirable
Sonnet
First half of the poem is a sonnet
Context and meaning
Illustrates Owen’s fury at being misled by war propaganda.
Shows his frustration that their deaths and suffering is futile rather than glorious
Owen tries to undermine war propaganda that said that men should be patriotic
Sluggish Language
Trudge
Limp
Lame
Deaf
Emphasises that war is anything but glamourous
Second Stanza
The panic in the second stanza presents a contrast
Contrasting images between sluggish and panic supports the argument in the final stanza that war is pointless
Alliteration
Repeated ‘b’ sound in the first 2 lines of the poem create a bitter and angry tone
The repeated sounds also create a sense of the monotony of war
Direct address to the reader
Addresses the reader directly through ‘you’ and ‘my friend’
Creates a sense of discomfort as Owen seems to be accusing the reader of being complicit in this lie through their lack of awareness about the realities of war
Change in pace/exclamation
Gas! Gas! Quick boys!
Signals a shift in tone from long winding sentences to shorter, more fragmented ones.
Mimics the sense of shock and upheaval in a sudden gas attack
Creates a sense of urgency and panic to emphasise how frightening war can be
Form and Rhyme
Irregular form with 4 stanzas of varying length
Reflects the lack of order and control in war
Poem follows a regular ABAB rhyme scheme which creates momentum throughout the poem
Emphasises the poetic voice’s passion and anger over the suffering he has experienced and his desperation for the truth about war to be known