Imtiaz Dharker
Pakistani - has travelled around the world
Visual Artist - references to lines and angles
2014 Queen’s medal for poetry
Went to a Calvinist School - poem has religious and cultural images
Ran away from family to marry an Indian Hindu.
Poem inspiration
Grew up in Scotland - spent time living in Mumbai (which was inspiration for this poem).
Based on her views of the slums and shanty towns of Mumbai.
Poem - Focus
About people’s lives, poverty, and hope
Poem warns about not stereotyping people - humanises people in poverty
Stanza 1
Broken up
External, physical
About buildings and structures
Stanza 2
Turning point/transition
Physical»_space; lives
House»_space; home
Outside»_space; inside
Physical»_space; mental/spiritual
Stanza 3
Unity
Hope for the future
One long sentence to the end, no caesura - no more disruptions, moving forward with the future
External life may be and appear broken, but internal life complete
Imagery of the egg
Eggs represent hope, new beginnings, but are fragile.
But eggs on windowsill means willing to take risks.
Rhyme/Structure
No obvious rhyme
No obvious meter
Enjambment and caesura - disrupting the natural flow, deliberate to make the poem irregular and visually off-centre, mirroring the physical reality of the slums
A little bit of rhyme in Stanza 3 - more sense of harmony