What’s the difference between revision and editing/proofreading?
Revision = deep changes
Editing and proofreading = surface change?
What are the 3 qualities that make string writing?
Clear
Concise
Direct
What does concise writing aim to eliminate?
Wordiness
What are 6 common sources of wordiness?
Redundancy
Repitition
Stock phrases
Camoflouged verbs
Weak verbs
Dummy subjects
Passive voice
What’s an example of a stock phrase and its corrected version?
Due to the fact that> because
Why are camoflouged verbs a problem?
They make sentences wordy and less direct
Ex, conduct an investigation> investagate
Why are shorter sentence better
They improve comprehension
What does vigorous writing use?
Concrete
Spececific
Abstract
General