main ideas
manmade v nature
masculinity v femininity
chainsaw and the grass are both what
extended metaphors
all winter unplugged
nose down
under the hatch
repression of masculinity
it knocked back a quarter pint of engine oil
colloquial language - represents masculine drinking culture
juices ran
oozed
masculinity waiting to be released/explode
weightless wreckage of wasps…wool
alliteration emphatic of destruction (of masculinity or the manmade)
day-glo orange power line
colour imagery - orange represents hostility - masculinity as dangerous?
like powder from a keg
walked
flicked
clipped
dropped
gunned
simile and dynamic verbs present masculinity as active and destructive
, just an instant rage,
caesura emphatic of the explosive anger due to repression
perfect disregard
disregard seems callous while perfect makes it seem as if there is a sense of enjoyment in this masculine release of emotion
flesh
bones
kick back
rear up
animalistic imagery to present the chainsaw as having primal qualities of violent behaviour
how is nature presented as feminine in the third stanza
cloth
jewellry
hair
warmth
light
immediate contrast to the femininity of the natural world
twelve foot spears
femininity ready to defend itself
or a pitchfork to lever it out at its base
mocks masculinity for being so over the top
Overkill.
minor sentence used to mock his ridiculous masculine aggression
dabbed
lifted
docked
change to more gentle verbs - the calm contrasts its earlier aggression
this was a game
callousness of the manmade/masculine - an ease of destruction
repetition of raked and cut
active verbs desperation to be released/dominate
‘…wouldn’t be dug up with a spade or prised from earth’
masculinity fails - the end stop conveys it is futile
choked with soil or fouled with weeds
change in dynamic verbs - the femininity/nature has the power now
.I left it at that.
caesura emphatic of the short utterance which conveys how easily masculinity was defeated
new shoots
sprang up
riding high
wearing a new crown
dynamic verbs now about natural world - that has the power
rebirth, regal, triumph etc
the chainsaw seethed
defeat, the futility of aggression - comical?