crippled or dark or girls
syndeton/tricolon
girls at the end emphatic of their lack of importance
likens femininity to a disabilty
why is there an ambiguous speaker and use of detatched language
to represent the girl’s confusion over her identity/belonging
example of the ambiguous speaker
this is the one my mother will bring
covered
stuffed
abandoned
unserstated verbs - emphatic of the horror of the treatment of these girls, there is no need to use figurative language to make it seem worse
why does Doshi take a minimalist approach
to emphasise the brutal reality of the treatment of female children in India
dug up by a dog
plosive alliteration emphatic of the aggressive and brutal reality
was bone or wood, something to chew
girls as discardable
this is the one my mother will bring
ambiguity over speaker
use of the pronoun ‘this’ and detatched tone emphatic of how she lacks identity and therefore significance
don’t know of her fetish
nervous behaviour as a result of her trauma
prolongued trauma - doesn’t settle with her adopted family either
her mother tried to bury her
minimalistic language and end stop
emphatic of the callous sense of brutality
We couldn’t stop crying (in Italics)
regret from the mother?
Italics emphatic of her regret - humanizes the mother
this girl shows up on video tapes
metaphor for sense of detatchment
enjambement in ‘she’s passed from woman// to woman.’
enj emphatic of her prolongued trauma - passed over multiple times
she returns to twilight corners
the darkness of her past
corners indicate secrecy - link to the concealment of infanticide
outside village boundaries
emphatic of her othered status
where mothers go to squeeze out life
dual meaning (giving birth and murdering) - creating a juxtaposing images
watch body slither out from body
biblical context - link to eve - women as untrustworthy/undeserving ?
feel for penis or no penis
parallel - significant decisions coming down to gender
toss the baby to the heap of the others
casual verb emphatic of the callous brutality and lack of care for girls
the heap of the others makes a direct reference to the scale of the issue of infanticide
trudge home to lie down for their men again
single line stanza emphatic
the mothers are also victims to the patriarchy