themes for this question
sex, desire
Endlessly,
time marker - constant - can not be satisfied
caesura - regular use of caesura emphatic of how sexual desire can be disruptive and uncontrollable
burst it as fast as you can
the active verb burst suggests that the satisfaction of sexual desire can be seen as destructive - link to deceptions
bestial, intent, real
tricolon presenting it as primitive, undignified and animalistic but also something that everyone experiences - it is reality
enj in until we’re enclosed//
emphatic of the restriction the speaker feels due to sexual desire
enclosed - restriction
bright blown walls collapse
plosive alliteration emphatic of the harsh blunt power of sexual desire and the lack of control the speaker feels as a result
sad scapes
ashen hills
shrunken lakes!
barren landscapes mimic the speaker’s feeling of emptiness when following the demands of sexual desire
it can never be satisfied - speaker feels unfulfilled
birmingham magic all discredited
birmingham famous for the manufacture of wedding rings
sex devalues ideas of marriage - the innocence of marriage is corrupted by the impurity of sexual desire
padlocked cube of light
light imagery and symbol to convey how the satisfaction and innocence is something he desires but ‘padlocked’ suggests that he will never achieve it - link to deceptions
,we dream,
caesura emphatic of how the satisfaction of sexual desire can never be a reality
structure comments
lack of a regular rhyme scheme to mimic the speaker’s lack of control over his sexual desire
repeated quatrains symbolic of the constant cycle of desire
A03 context
the 60s normalised/modernised attitudes towards sex
sex is like asking someone else to blow your own nose
sex is too good to be shared