Title analysis
explores the superficial attraction within initial relationships
what are the two voices explored in this poem
1) the desire to engage with the superficial attraction - the power of her beauty
2) desire to avoid meaningful relationships
latest face
impersonal language, degrading
so effortless
the ease at which the initial relationship is established between them
beauty had no home till then
precious vagrant
oxymoron - her beauty had no value until he recognised it
do not turn again
imperatives - he has ownership
enj in // on a useless level
emphatic of how superficial attraction is meaningless
real untidy air
metaphor - presents meaningful relationships as complicated - superficial relationships are meaningless but he doesn’t want a meaningful one either
link to poet Maudit
bargains, suffering, and love
tricolon - relationships are burdensome and full of compromise - link to No Road
always planned salute
AO3 link
he sees relationships as conformist
A03 - marriage boom - he never marries
lies grow dark
dark imagery - relationships are deceptive
will the statue of your beauty walk?
the power of her beauty - he is too infatuated with her beauty he will have to chase behind her
must I wade behind it
the relationship is a burden
is your power actual
if he avoids being drawn in by the superficial attraction he can avoid the relationship and then she has no real power over him
duck and run
leap from the sun
mask
semantic field of avoidance - desire to avoid relationships
structural comments
ABA CBC initial rhyme scheme - rigid structure to mimic the restriction of relationships
then moves to half rhyme then no set rhyme scheme - mimics the breakdown of the relationship and his avoidance